Here's a very short excerpt from "Cottage":
I don't know what time it was when I woke up. At first, I was a bit disoriented, but as I lay there listening, I began to hear voices, hushed voices, as if there were people in the room with me and they were keeping their voices down trying not to awaken me. I couldn't distinguish what they were saying, but I knew it was voices I was hearing.
I reached for my cell phone where it sat on the floor beside the bed and the voices stopped.
I sat up and turned on the small lamp sitting on the floor beside me. I looked around the room, but no one was there. I got up and walked over to the window, expecting to see people walking around outside. There was no one out there.
Update: I'm now at 7,727 words. I worked on my Zane Greywolf novel, wrote up Fox's second post and am now in the middle of Sawyer's second post. After I finish this post, I have another scene or two in mind for Fox and/ or Sawyer, so it should be fun. :)I'll be back later to update again! :D
I finished Sawyer's second journal entry, then I worked on the scene I wanted to write. Here's a short excerpt:
Suddenly, Burns, Ramsey, Travis and Giles pulled their bandannas up 'round their faces and waved their guns around, tellin' everyone to get down.Needless to say that Fox is in a heap of trouble. ;) But he's just found his brother. Sawyer is a drunk, at this point, and Fox doesn't know if he'll be much help, but his brother is his only hope of escape right now.
I began to sink to my knees, but Giles pulled me to my feet.
“Not you. You've gotta get the cash.”
“I what?” I exclaimed, starin' at him.
“You heard me,” he said. “Get back in there and fill up these bags.”
“And if I don't?”
Giles touched the tip of his gun's barrel to my forehead.
“Bang!”
He laughed and I failed to see the humor in his joke...
...We mounted our horses and hightailed it out of there as fast as we could, sprayin' dust and gravel everywhere. My heart was pumpin' faster than ever. I loved action, but this kind of action I could do without. I was gonna be in a lot of trouble thanks to these guys.
So, the day got off to a slow start, but I finally did it. I reached 10K+ by about 8:00 p.m. I'm a happy camper. :)






